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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
 Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
 |  Subject: Soul Of Valis  Mon 04 Feb 2008, 3:12 am | |
| Soul Of Valis Ch 1: The Unbelievable EscapeHas anyone read it?? I decided to open this thread to comment about it!!  Yay!!!  it's sooooo cool!!!  * edit 2008 march 4th: added the pic of Valis sword... I really think it fits here... also added the link... (you can read it HERE ) _________________  Valis won't die... 'cause Warriors can't be stopped! _________ If there's a heaven...
I'll be there, fighting togheter the bravest Valis Warriors... Forever
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evilReiko
Dark Valis Soldier
Number of posts: 629
Age: 23
Location: Darkest region of DarkWorld
Hobbies: Escape..
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Tue 05 Feb 2008, 6:35 am | |
| thanx alot Soldier for opening this thread  the story is a free-reader interpretation. Meaning, readers won't get the points of the story directly, but they have to think, notice, and conclude to understand the story. It's like putting the reader in the position of detective Conan  you will enjoy reading the story alot, and it is so interesting trying to figure out the ideas and truths  BTW, Soul of Valis will be locally distributed in my region in books (not for sure, but hopefully ) also, if you're a very slow reader, you won't need more than few minutes for reading a chapter |
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XAhsoYuko
Daydreaming Soldier
Number of posts: 48
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Tue 05 Feb 2008, 11:54 am | |
| Wait? What?! Where can I find a copy of this? |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Wed 06 Feb 2008, 12:25 am | |
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evilReiko
Dark Valis Soldier
Number of posts: 629
Age: 23
Location: Darkest region of DarkWorld
Hobbies: Escape..
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Wed 06 Feb 2008, 3:34 am | |
| | evilReiko wrote: | | It's like putting the reader in the position of detective Conan |
| Soldier wrote: | who?  |
you don't know detective Conan  ?
well.. it's a very famous anime, take alook, you may already know him 
| Soldier wrote: | I want a copy too!!!
wait a sec... is it in arabic???  |
it's the same, in english
it will be photocopied and distributed, only in my region (not even the whole country ), but if it was successful, maybe later it get distributed for more wide regions
anyway, it's the same as in Evil Reiko's Homepage. No difference at all |
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Valis77
Administrator/Founder
Number of posts: 687
Age: 32
Location: Dreamland of Valis
Job: Queen of Dreamland
Hobbies: Supporting Big Sis Yuko,Lena,and Cham with my magic.
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Wed 06 Feb 2008, 1:17 pm | |
| detective conan we watched that on cartoon network a few years back. But that named it: "Cased Closed" 
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evilReiko
Dark Valis Soldier
Number of posts: 629
Age: 23
Location: Darkest region of DarkWorld
Hobbies: Escape..
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Thu 14 Feb 2008, 3:51 pm | |
| well.. have anyone read Chapter 2: The Forbidden Truth? it's already up well.. yesterday, one of my deviantArt friends (who's by the way is not a Valis fan) sent me a PM, she told me: | Quote: | OMG O_O I just read the first two chapters of your fanfic O_O & I read the recommendation when I finished >< I wouldn't have waited either way XD I'll be "patiently" waiting for the continuation...
but...there's so much "evil" in it...especially the killings...they are unbelievably too much O_O if that was in Sailor Moon then the people would've just had their energies sucked out.
I almost cried when Spark's son died T_T & it was disturbing when the little girl killed herself T__T this story is definitely not for kids XD LOL
it's well written and your style of presenting the story itself is catchy...I already moved the screen closer after reading the first paragraph ...good work
I still feel sorry for the girl...her parents died when she was a just a baby |
this is not the whole PM, in the end of the PM, she asked me to upload chapter 3 as soon as possible, she can't wait more |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Tue 04 Mar 2008, 1:31 am | |
|  ch 2 is soo cool... she's right, this story is not for little children... but it is AMAZING.... I read ch 3 too... Adopted Child... it is up too!!! It is about origins of Valis.... the kingdom... the sword... the Legend  It is soo sad...  so exciting.... so interesting...  poor Valia....  I can't wait to read ch 4!!!!  I just had to move it to announcement section... it has to be there!!!! _________________ Valis won't die... 'cause Warriors can't be stopped! _________ If there's a heaven...
I'll be there, fighting togheter the bravest Valis Warriors... Forever |
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Valis77
Administrator/Founder
Number of posts: 687
Age: 32
Location: Dreamland of Valis
Job: Queen of Dreamland
Hobbies: Supporting Big Sis Yuko,Lena,and Cham with my magic.
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Tue 04 Mar 2008, 4:45 pm | |
| YES! Now we will see what the Origin of Valis. Who origininates,how was the twins of Yuko and Valna was born no to mentioned Reiko and Cham. |
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evilReiko
Dark Valis Soldier
Number of posts: 629
Age: 23
Location: Darkest region of DarkWorld
Hobbies: Escape..
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Wed 05 Mar 2008, 5:36 am | |
| I'm so glad you guys liked the story  the story talks about origins of Valis until the very end  ,  &  are going to take some roles in the story, but  will not be there. but there are also new great characters, you will see BTW, check the site in 10th March 2008, there will be new update |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Sat 15 Mar 2008, 1:40 am | |
| Ch 4 Death's Fate is Up!!!! Have you guys checked it??? it brings me back so many memories... it is so sad...  to imagine everything started like that.... ....  ..... _________________ Valis won't die... 'cause Warriors can't be stopped! _________ If there's a heaven...
I'll be there, fighting togheter the bravest Valis Warriors... Forever |
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evilReiko
Dark Valis Soldier
Number of posts: 629
Age: 23
Location: Darkest region of DarkWorld
Hobbies: Escape..
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Sun 16 Mar 2008, 12:10 am | |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Mon 17 Mar 2008, 1:32 am | |
| ch 5: A Mother Hatred.... ....  I guess it has to do with and  .... and how  abandoned her daughters.... I'm sure it'll be a very sad chapter... about the comment of your friend in DevianArt.. I guess she thought on as the main protagonist because of your name... and thought you'll be focusing in only ... maybe you can write a separate story about that’ll be interesting... _________________ Valis won't die... 'cause Warriors can't be stopped! _________ If there's a heaven...
I'll be there, fighting togheter the bravest Valis Warriors... Forever |
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evilReiko
Dark Valis Soldier
Number of posts: 629
Age: 23
Location: Darkest region of DarkWorld
Hobbies: Escape..
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Mon 17 Mar 2008, 2:27 am | |
| | Soldier wrote: | ch 5: A Mother Hatred.... ....
I guess it has to do with and ....
and how abandoned her daughters....
I'm sure it'll be a very sad chapter... |
very nice try
but it's presented in a very interesting way, and the events are more exciting
| Quote: | about the comment of your friend in DevianArt..
I guess she thought on as the main protagonist because of your name...
and thought you'll be focusing in only ...
maybe you can write a separate story about that’ll be interesting... |
she already know that is not the main character, but she expected alot from her
but I will surely write a seperate story for , a manga story  |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Tue 18 Mar 2008, 1:09 am | |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Sun 23 Mar 2008, 2:39 am | |
| Ch 5: A Mother Hatred is up!!!It’s very nice!  It’s very intriguing… I don’t know what to feel … somehow, I’m sad for Valia… But also, I understand Eliza’s feelings…. I loved the part where Eliza starts whispering, and finally, Valia gets angry and shouts at her… It’s very exciting…!!! I wonder what she meant with her last sentence….   I had to read ch 2, 3 and 4 again!!! It’s a very nice story! _________________ Valis won't die... 'cause Warriors can't be stopped! _________ If there's a heaven...
I'll be there, fighting togheter the bravest Valis Warriors... Forever |
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Glacier36
Legend in Training
Number of posts: 18
Age: 22
Job: King/Emperor of Vecanti
Hobbies: Plotting the demise of Dreamworld and the expansion of my Kingdom.
Registration date: 2007-08-17
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Mon 24 Mar 2008, 3:01 pm | |
| To quote a certain movie, reading all this recent stuff on the forum makes me feel liek a Timex Watch in the Digital age.... where have I been all these months!? Reiko, I swear to god I'll try and read the story whenever I can tae myself from my constant dtory-thinking activies |
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evilReiko
Dark Valis Soldier
Number of posts: 629
Age: 23
Location: Darkest region of DarkWorld
Hobbies: Escape..
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Tue 25 Mar 2008, 5:23 am | |
| | Quote: | | Reiko, I swear to god I'll try and read the story whenever I can tae myself from my constant dtory-thinking activies |
don't push yourself hard.
You don't really need to specify some time to read "Soul of Valis". Each chapter is very exciting, free of complicated-English structure, and very short. Just read the first sentence of a chapter, and you will find yourself at the end of the chapter already |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Fri 25 Apr 2008, 4:04 pm | |
| Hey Warriors! have you checked it already??? Ch 6: The End .... is Up!!!! The story is becaming more and more interesting... I felt so bad... poor  .... and ..... and the role of the Angel... is getting more and more interesting... check it out !!!! _________________ Valis won't die... 'cause Warriors can't be stopped! _________ If there's a heaven...
I'll be there, fighting togheter the bravest Valis Warriors... Forever |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Wed 14 May 2008, 8:39 pm | |
| Hey Warriors…!!! I’m a little late to update this… Ch 7: Black Bloodline Is up since two weeks ago…  and suffer a lot in here… besides… The Curse… the Sword… the Bloodline… it is so exciting !!! Don’t miss this chapter! A huge secret is revealed!!!  The next chapter … is… is… I can’t wait to read it!!! _________________ Valis won't die... 'cause Warriors can't be stopped! _________ If there's a heaven...
I'll be there, fighting togheter the bravest Valis Warriors... Forever |
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evilReiko
Dark Valis Soldier
Number of posts: 629
Age: 23
Location: Darkest region of DarkWorld
Hobbies: Escape..
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Thu 15 May 2008, 12:44 am | |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Thu 15 May 2008, 8:36 pm | |
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evilReiko
Dark Valis Soldier
Number of posts: 629
Age: 23
Location: Darkest region of DarkWorld
Hobbies: Escape..
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Wed 21 May 2008, 2:19 pm | |
| sorry guys, chapter 8 will delay, 'cause I need to fix alot of events of chapter 8 and the coming chapters |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Thu 22 May 2008, 10:16 am | |
| I can always wait a little more in order to get something nice from Valis... I'm sure it was fine, but now it'll become someting even better.... can't wait to read it!!!! _________________ Valis won't die... 'cause Warriors can't be stopped! _________ If there's a heaven...
I'll be there, fighting togheter the bravest Valis Warriors... Forever |
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betaflex1
Spirit Soldiers
Number of posts: 94
Age: 23
Hobbies: Blowing stuff up, female leads, obscure/less-known games, DOOM
Registration date: 2008-05-09
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Wed 09 Jul 2008, 4:20 am | |
| Just now I read through the seven chapters of Soul of Valis, and noticed a very interesting twist during reading it. Good work, I must say! |
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Soldier
Lena’s Dreams Bearer
Number of posts: 521
Age: 31
Location: Back on the Reddish Moon....
Job: Keep Hope Alive
Hobbies: just time left for Lena ...
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Wed 09 Jul 2008, 10:02 am | |
| I agree... Isn't Evil Reiko a great writter???  I love this story!!! _________________ Valis won't die... 'cause Warriors can't be stopped! _________ If there's a heaven...
I'll be there, fighting togheter the bravest Valis Warriors... Forever |
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iannafei
Valis Fantasm Soldier (Armor: Level 1)
 Number of posts: 131
Age: 33
Registration date: 2008-04-23
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Wed 09 Jul 2008, 11:06 pm | |
| I love the story too.  I just wonder when the next chapter is going to be out? I know you probably are pretty busy with other stuff, Evil Reiko, but could you at least give us a ballpark figure about when the next chapter will be out? Pretty please? |
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evilReiko
Dark Valis Soldier
Number of posts: 629
Age: 23
Location: Darkest region of DarkWorld
Hobbies: Escape..
Registration date: 2007-07-08
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Thu 10 Jul 2008, 12:46 am | |
| | betaflex1 wrote: | | Just now I read through the seven chapters of Soul of Valis, and noticed a very interesting twist during reading it. Good work, I must say! |
| Soldier wrote: | | I love this story!!! |
| iannafei wrote: | | I love the story too. |
 oh guys you're embarrassing me 
but I'm really happy you're enjoying this little story
| iannafei wrote: | I just wonder when the next chapter is going to be out?
I know you probably are pretty busy with other stuff, Evil Reiko, but could you at least give us a ballpark figure about when the next chapter will be out? Pretty please? |
the whole story is already written, I just need to check it for spelling/grammer mistakes 
The thing that is delaying me is that I'm currently working on my site (it's supposed to be a surprise, but I will tell you..) This coming udpate delayed for about 2 months already because I'm not updating it, but instead, I'm creating a new design for the website the new design will make you enjoy reading and wandering in the site more than before
anyway, I'm trying to finish this new design as soon as possible. Hopefully I will finish it within 1 week <-- I just hope so |
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iannafei
Valis Fantasm Soldier (Armor: Level 1)
Number of posts: 131
Age: 33
Registration date: 2008-04-23
| | Subject: Re: Soul Of Valis Fri 11 Jul 2008, 12:38 am | |
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