Soul Of Valis

Soul Of Valis



Ch 1: The Unbelievable Escape

Has anyone read it?? I decided to open this thread to comment about it!!

Yay!!!
it's sooooo cool!!!

* edit 2008 march 4th: added the pic of Valis sword... I really think it fits here...
also added the link...

(you can read it HERE )

thanx alot Soldier for opening this thread

the story is a free-reader interpretation. Meaning, readers won't get the points of the story directly, but they have to think, notice, and conclude to understand the story. It's like putting the reader in the position of detective Conan

you will enjoy reading the story alot, and it is so interesting trying to figure out the ideas and truths

BTW, Soul of Valis will be locally distributed in my region in books (not for sure, but hopefully )

also, if you're a very slow reader, you won't need more than few minutes for reading a chapter

Wait? What?! Where can I find a copy of this?

evilReiko wrote:

It's like putting the reader in the position of detective Conan

who?

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BTW, Soul of Valis will be locally distributed in my region in books (not for sure, but hopefully )

I want a copy too!!!

wait a sec... is it in arabic???

XAshoYuko wrote:

Wait? What?! Where can I find a copy of this?

don't worry XAshoYuko, you can read it Here...


I realized I forgot to mention something important...

the autor is Evil Reiko!!! member of this forum!!!!

so don't hesitate to read it!

evilReiko wrote:

It's like putting the reader in the position of detective Conan

Soldier wrote:

who?

you don't know detective Conan ?

well.. it's a very famous anime, take alook, you may already know him

Soldier wrote:

I want a copy too!!!

wait a sec... is it in arabic???

it's the same, in english

it will be photocopied and distributed, only in my region (not even the whole country ), but if it was successful, maybe later it get distributed for more wide regions

anyway, it's the same as in Evil Reiko's Homepage. No difference at all

detective conan we watched that on cartoon network a few years back. But that named it: "Cased Closed"

well.. have anyone read Chapter 2: The Forbidden Truth? it's already up

well.. yesterday, one of my deviantArt friends (who's by the way is not a Valis fan) sent me a PM, she told me:

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OMG O_O I just read the first two chapters of your fanfic O_O & I read the recommendation when I finished >< I wouldn't have waited either way XD I'll be "patiently" waiting for the continuation...

but...there's so much "evil" in it...especially the killings...they are unbelievably too much O_O if that was in Sailor Moon then the people would've just had their energies sucked out.
I almost cried when Spark's son died T_T & it was disturbing when the little girl killed herself T__T this story is definitely not for kids XD LOL

it's well written and your style of presenting the story itself is catchy...I already moved the screen closer after reading the first paragraph ...good work

I still feel sorry for the girl...her parents died when she was a just a baby

this is not the whole PM, in the end of the PM, she asked me to upload chapter 3 as soon as possible, she can't wait more

ch 2 is soo cool... she's right, this story is not for little children...

but it is AMAZING....

I read ch 3 too... Adopted Child... it is up too!!!

It is about origins of Valis.... the kingdom... the sword... the Legend

It is soo sad... so exciting.... so interesting...

poor Valia....

I can't wait to read ch 4!!!!

I just had to move it to announcement section... it has to be there!!!!

YES! Now we will see what the Origin of Valis. Who origininates,how was the twins of Yuko and Valna was born no to mentioned Reiko and Cham.

I'm so glad you guys liked the story

the story talks about origins of Valis until the very end

, & are going to take some roles in the story, but will not be there. but there are also new great characters, you will see

BTW, check the site in 10th March 2008, there will be new update

Ch 4 Death's Fate is Up!!!!

Have you guys checked it???

it brings me back so many memories... it is so sad...
to imagine everything started like that....
....
.....

I'm glad you liked it

what do you expect of events in chapter 5?


BTW, one of my friends in deviantArt.com commented about chapter 4:

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Yup.
It took 4 chapters for the star to appear & just one chapter for her to disappear

*spoiler alert*
I support Yuko all the way because she's innocently innocent
But Reiko was innocent too
*end of spoiler*

Looking forward to ch5 XD

she meant by the "star"

ch 5: A Mother Hatred.... ....

I guess it has to do with and ....
and how abandoned her daughters....

I'm sure it'll be a very sad chapter...


about the comment of your friend in DevianArt..

I guess she thought on as the main protagonist because of your name...
and thought you'll be focusing in only ...

maybe you can write a separate story about that’ll be interesting...

Soldier wrote:

ch 5: A Mother Hatred.... ....

I guess it has to do with and ....
and how abandoned her daughters....

I'm sure it'll be a very sad chapter...

very nice try

but it's presented in a very interesting way, and the events are more exciting

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about the comment of your friend in DevianArt..

I guess she thought on as the main protagonist because of your name...
and thought you'll be focusing in only ...

maybe you can write a separate story about that’ll be interesting...

she already know that is not the main character, but she expected alot from her

but I will surely write a seperate story for , a manga story

evilReiko wrote:

but I will surely write a seperate story for , a manga story

That 's gonna be ....
( I don't have adjectives to say more than wonderful... )

Ch 5: A Mother Hatred is up!!!

It’s very nice!

It’s very intriguing… I don’t know what to feel … somehow, I’m sad for Valia… But also, I understand Eliza’s feelings….

I loved the part where Eliza starts whispering, and finally, Valia gets angry and shouts at her… It’s very exciting…!!!

I wonder what she meant with her last sentence….

I had to read ch 2, 3 and 4 again!!!
It’s a very nice story!

To quote a certain movie, reading all this recent stuff on the forum makes me feel liek a Timex Watch in the Digital age.... where have I been all these months!?

Reiko, I swear to god I'll try and read the story whenever I can tae myself from my constant dtory-thinking activies

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Reiko, I swear to god I'll try and read the story whenever I can tae myself from my constant dtory-thinking activies

don't push yourself hard.

You don't really need to specify some time to read "Soul of Valis". Each chapter is very exciting, free of complicated-English structure, and very short. Just read the first sentence of a chapter, and you will find yourself at the end of the chapter already

Glacier36 wrote:

Reiko, I swear to god I'll try and read the story whenever I can tae myself from my constant dtory-thinking activies

I agree with Evil Reiko... try to enjoy the reading....
just log to the internet, and take a tour in Evil Reiko's page...
read the first chapter, take your time.. and whenever you got some extra free time, go to ch 2...
the most important here, is to enjoy this story.... It's VALIS!!!

Hey Warriors!
have you checked it already???

Ch 6: The End .... is Up!!!!

The story is becaming more and more interesting...
I felt so bad... poor .... and .....

and the role of the Angel... is getting more and more interesting...

check it out !!!!

Hey Warriors…!!!

I’m a little late to update this…

Ch 7: Black Bloodline

Is up since two weeks ago…

and suffer a lot in here… besides…

The Curse… the Sword… the Bloodline… it is so exciting !!!

Don’t miss this chapter! A huge secret is revealed!!!


The next chapter … is… is… I can’t wait to read it!!!

chapter 7 is full of excitment, on 17th May I will upload Chapter 8 which will be so mysterious

Soldier wrote:

The next chapter … is… is… I can’t wait to read it!!!

you will never guess what it's about you will surely like it and it has.. unique & different type of excitement

evilReiko wrote:

you will never guess what it's about you will surely like it and it has.. unique & different type of excitement

Sinful Rival is the title...
I'm really enjoying reading this story... I'm sure I won't get disapointed...

so near, so far... only 2 days are missing....

sorry guys, chapter 8 will delay, 'cause I need to fix alot of events of chapter 8 and the coming chapters

I can always wait a little more in order to get something nice from Valis...
I'm sure it was fine, but now it'll become someting even better....
can't wait to read it!!!!

Just now I read through the seven chapters of Soul of Valis, and noticed a very interesting twist during reading it. Good work, I must say!

I agree...
Isn't Evil Reiko a great writter???

I love this story!!!

I love the story too.

I just wonder when the next chapter is going to be out?

I know you probably are pretty busy with other stuff, Evil Reiko, but could you at least give us a ballpark figure about when the next chapter will be out? Pretty please?

betaflex1 wrote:

Just now I read through the seven chapters of Soul of Valis, and noticed a very interesting twist during reading it. Good work, I must say!

Soldier wrote:

I love this story!!!

iannafei wrote:

I love the story too.

oh guys you're embarrassing me

but I'm really happy you're enjoying this little story

iannafei wrote:

I just wonder when the next chapter is going to be out?

I know you probably are pretty busy with other stuff, Evil Reiko, but could you at least give us a ballpark figure about when the next chapter will be out? Pretty please?

the whole story is already written, I just need to check it for spelling/grammer mistakes

The thing that is delaying me is that I'm currently working on my site (it's supposed to be a surprise, but I will tell you..) This coming udpate delayed for about 2 months already because I'm not updating it, but instead, I'm creating a new design for the website the new design will make you enjoy reading and wandering in the site more than before

anyway, I'm trying to finish this new design as soon as possible. Hopefully I will finish it within 1 week <-- I just hope so

evilReiko wrote:

the whole story is already written, I just need to check it for spelling/grammer mistakes

The thing that is delaying me is that I'm currently working on my site (it's supposed to be a surprise, but I will tell you..) This coming udpate delayed for about 2 months already because I'm not updating it, but instead, I'm creating a new design for the website the new design will make you enjoy reading and wandering in the site more than before

anyway, I'm trying to finish this new design as soon as possible. Hopefully I will finish it within 1 week <-- I just hope so

Well, I wish you luck on your new design. I'm also looking forward to the next chapter too.